A person who we should learn from doesn’t need to be rich and famous. It could be the person we live with him. For me, it’s my father.

I still remember the days when I was child. Although he had plenty of works to do, but he still stayed with me and played children’s games with me. With time go by, I’m in Senior 3 now. It is me who have no time to stay with him now! However, he is still behind me and try his best to make a better life for our family. How handsome 高三短文改错A person who we should learn from doesn’t needand selflessly he is! I am really very grateful for him.

In my mind, he is not only my father, but also a hero living with me!

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A person who we should learn from doesn’t need to be rich and famous. It could be the 

                                                    or

people we live with them. For me, it’s my father.

            them去掉

I still remember the days when I was child. Although he had plenty of works to do, but he 

                               加a                          work       but去掉

still stayed with me and played children’s games with me. With time go by, I’m in Senior 3 now. It 

                                                       going

is me who have no time to stay with him now! However, he is still behind me and try his best to 

   I                                                             tries（trying）

make a better life for our family. How handsome and selflessly he is! I am really very grateful for 

                                           selfless                           to

him.

In my mind, he is not only my father, but also a hero with me!